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Post by Grailknight on Sat Jun 21, 2008 3:57 am

Feel free to comment. But if you steal any of it, God will be my dreadful vindicator!






my hands are

bloodred by sin

stream of tears

black by regret

from a heart

brown by rot

so heed my prayer

O winters creator



you alone can make

my soul white as snow




I ripp my garmets of pride

my eyes I bow down and hide

from my head hair Ive pulled

and now I sit down appalled




instead I put on sackcloth

and roll in ashes and soot

with bitter wailing I mourn

as for the death of an only son





I Grieve

and I wail

I´ve Changed

my laughter to mourning

and my joy to gloom

myself I´ve Humbled

before the Lord

and he will lift me up




Woe to you who laugh now

Cause one day you will weep

God opposes the proud

but gives grace to the meek




Godly sorrow brings repentance

that leads to salvation

and leaves no regret

but worldly sorrow will bring death
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Post by Lady Thornball on Sat Jun 21, 2008 4:34 am

I like this line;

you alone can make
my soul white as snow

:)
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Post by BloodDrift on Sat Jun 21, 2008 8:23 am

I liked it !
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Post by Ash on Sat Jun 21, 2008 9:27 am

I like it.

My favorite lyrics are those that are not too "poetic"... but rather straight forward.. like these.

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Post by Grailknight on Sat Jun 21, 2008 9:31 am

Thanx, argee.

But I like it when it has a poetic touch of Rhymes and such. And cool words. But lyrics that is so "poetic" you can translate it into anything you want doesnt really help me alot. And I doubt it helps anyone else.
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Post by Ash on Sat Jun 21, 2008 1:23 pm

Grailknight wrote:Thanx, argee.

But I like it when it has a poetic touch of Rhymes and such. And cool words. But lyrics that is so "poetic" you can translate it into anything you want doesnt really help me alot. And I doubt it helps anyone else.

yep.. what matters in songs, in my opinion... is having enough written clarity to be powerful,, but yet not being so "clear" that you are leaving out imagination.. if you know what I mean..

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Post by Grailknight on Sat Jun 21, 2008 4:17 pm

I think so. Imagination is a part of art and lyrics and music is an artform.
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Post by jonas von barsk on Sat Jun 28, 2008 7:14 pm

Is poetry songs that dont have the music done yet?

Nice Grail....
a new song???
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Post by Grailknight on Sat Jun 28, 2008 7:16 pm

Its for your song Jonas. The one you wanted to change abit on your computer. The one you made violins on in the slow parts. Suspect
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Post by jonas von barsk on Tue Jul 08, 2008 8:07 am

I cant remember every song! eeve
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Post by xiandown on Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:48 am

reminds me of psalms of david. was that an inspiration?
good work.
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Cool!

Post by QueenLiAnn on Sun Nov 06, 2011 9:46 am

Sounds great, i really like the way you can use words.
I don't have a very broad vocabulary, so i could never write something
like this, but i enjoy reading it alot :)
God Bless!
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